Pain to acceptance
When the tears burn you know their real. People may ask what's your deal. My answer when someone grabs you and reels. You want them for life. To help you fight. Your pain is no match for your bond. I mean come on. the space between shouldn't hurt. But sometimes it pushes me into the dirt. At least I know I am not forgotten or pushed away like I'm rotten. but instead restored. In the faith that god pours.
I like the creative rhymes do more of them
ReplyDeleteThe words in this flow really well, and this is very deep. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI agreed with Lucy M. This does flow together really well, and holds some real emotions behind it. It speaks to the reader and makes them think while they read it, like any good poetry does.
ReplyDeletethat's deep, I like this.
ReplyDeletethat's deep, I like this.
ReplyDeleteI like the title, it tells a lot about the actual paragraph. The wording is very nice.
ReplyDeleteI was crying when I wrote that...
ReplyDeleteThis is your best work matter of fact your only work but very good
ReplyDeleteThis is your best work because you tell a great story but also use excellent rhymes.
ReplyDeleteThis is your best because its full of emotion, real emotion thats yours.
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